tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2883554250280529997.post8978017092815903295..comments2023-03-25T08:38:04.563+00:00Comments on Ims Fire - the blog formerly known as Imogen's Creative Fire: Drafting a query letter...Imogenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12811393485894960485noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2883554250280529997.post-16888624663976407712009-06-16T02:09:17.732+01:002009-06-16T02:09:17.732+01:00I thought it was good, however if it was me, I wou...I thought it was good, however if it was me, I would drop the comparisons unless asked for and insert my own snazzy outline/brief synopsis that makes the story come to life...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2883554250280529997.post-18958651090596865842009-06-08T12:04:58.961+01:002009-06-08T12:04:58.961+01:00Lawrenceez - the simple design is due mainly to my...Lawrenceez - the simple design is due mainly to my being unable to do anything else! I am a relative baby where computers are concerned. <br />Wanderer - nice one, but somehow I don't think that would wash!...Imogenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12811393485894960485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2883554250280529997.post-18199974360437719582009-06-08T03:43:45.406+01:002009-06-08T03:43:45.406+01:00A bit on the backfoot for this antipodean. Go the ...A bit on the backfoot for this antipodean. Go the agent. What about something along the lines:<br /><br />Dear Agent, consider yourself lucky to be given first option on my masterpiece, chapter 1 enclosed herein.wandererhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08196036534397389760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2883554250280529997.post-42697802496253806042009-06-06T10:43:19.079+01:002009-06-06T10:43:19.079+01:00Looks like a great blogsite. The simple design is ...Looks like a great blogsite. The simple design is impressive.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com