Showing posts with label great writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label great writing. Show all posts

Friday, 12 October 2012

A film review (a long one)



Well, I did it; I watched it.  I bought it in a sale, several months ago, and then stuck it on my shelf thinking “You’re going to have to watch this sooner or later, now you’ve paid a fiver for it” until in the end my innate meanness pushed me into sticking it in the dvd player last night.  Because I’d paid for it.  If someone had given it to me it’s quite likely I would have passed it to a charity shop, unwatched.

I’ve been a bit of an idiot, because of course it was nothing like what I had expected.  I had stated pretty firmly in public, a few months ago, that I had no intention of watching this film as my nerves wouldn’t take it.  Ahem; just before I bought it.  Yes, I’m not always logical.  But I knew what the subject matter was, and I told myself that my imagination could conjure plenty to alarm and horrify me without my needing to see a realistic depiction in technicolour.  Ding dong, wrong wrong.  It is a brilliant film and I can understand entirely why it won so many awards.

I do feel that there was a bit of a whoops on the part of the marketing team, though.  By splashing quotes on the cover of the dvd that emphasise that this is a war movie and an action movie, and putting images of explosions and screaming faces on the sleeve, they make it look like something it is not - a full-on violent action piece in the “boys-will-be-men” genre; something like a modern-day “Dirty Dozen”.  They gave me expectations which the film itself then completely overturned.  I’m delighted about that; but anyone who had wanted “The Dirty Dozen” would have been bitterly disappointed. 

What I had expected was something very violent, with a seriously high level of blowings-up, shootouts and general death and mayhem.  I was expecting explicit gore and horror, and to be scared stiff a lot of the time.  I was also expecting the film to be pretty gung-ho, and I was certain it would be political.  I didn’t know whether it would be pro-war political, or pro-this-war political, or anti-war political, or anti-this-war political; and I didn’t much care which one it was, to be honest, since in a war movie, having a political stance generally turns the characters and the story into ciphers whose sole purpose is to illustrate the film-makers’ point, and whether I agree with their point or not that still makes for a less interesting film.  

So, anyway, I was anticipating being hit over the head with one of the following: A) Our glorious, noble boys are fighting for freedom, rah!  B) Our glorious, noble boys are fighting for freedom this time even if they weren’t in ‘Nam, slightly-less-rah!  C) Our poor boys always end up getting into fights because they are men and men always get in fights because they don’t know any better, boo!  or D) Our poor boys are being misled into laying down their lives by corrupt politicians, but they’re still glorious and noble even if misguided, slightly-less-boo! 

With lashings of blood and guts, and graphically-highlighted corpses mounded to left and right till the set looks like Cuchulainn’s defence of the ford. 

Well, there is a bit of gore, indeed quite a lot in places.  There are deaths.  There are explosions (there would have to be explosions, really).  There is a fair amount of shooting at times.  But none of this is handled in the way I expected.  The violence is there because it’s essential – perhaps a better term would be unavoidable - since the setting of this story is a war zone; but the way it’s treated is as low-key as is feasible.  It’s never gratuitous, it’s not lingered over, and as much as possible it’s kept painfully human.  One is not allowed to forget for one moment that each wound, each death, each moment of fear or grief or shock, happens to a human being and not a plot device.

Then there’s the fact that it’s startlingly apolitical; war is the context, but it’s kept right in the background.  No-one ever talks about it in terms of politics, beliefs, right or wrong, etc.  It’s just the situation these men are in – the same as a building site is the situation builders are in, the same as the office I’m sitting in now, writing this while I eat my lunch, is the situation I’m in.  There’s no preaching, from any side, and no nationalistic claptrap, and neither glorification nor liberal breast-beating and wailing of woe.   That’s not to say there isn’t a message (more on this anon), but the message is again kept resolutely on a human level.

Overall, what one gets is a series of almost random vignettes that build up into a powerful exploration of the effects of unremitting stress and the shifting balance of instinctive dislike and growing comradeship between three mismatched men enduring said stress while working together in appallingly difficult conditions.  God, that’s a clumsy sentence; sorry about that.  We see these men argue, hit one another, yell at one another, struggle to understand one another; we see them bond and un-bond and then re-bond...  But an action piece it’s not.  It’s a psychological study in human character and human tension, and far more than it is violent it is deeply moving.

About the only expectation I had that was not thoroughly confounded was the one of being frightened.  I was genuinely terrified for the three principal characters, most of the time; the creation and sustaining of tension is brilliantly done.

This is achieved, as far as I can see, by a combination of several very simple things having all been got right.  The director knows exactly what she is doing; the script is excellent, clear and brilliantly economical; and the cast is superb.   I could leave it there – that does kind of say it all, after all.  But I was so impressed that I found myself analysing what I had been watching; trying to work out why it works so very, very well.

Take the opening.  The first scene lasts, what, eight or ten minutes?  I didn’t count the lines of dialogue, but there aren’t that many – maybe fifty lines altogether.  It’s just some men in a street, talking about their work, then executing it.  The scene is set; not just the immediate scene – this street, this day – but the whole scene – this city, this country, this conflict.  We’re shown what these men’s work is and their individual roles within the team.  We see how they interrelate, and how at ease they are with one another.  It’s clear that they have worked together over a period of time, in dangerous conditions.  We learn a surprising amount about how roadside bombs work, too; by the time the explosion occurs, we know precisely what has happened to the man who falls and does not get up, and why.  All this is done without a single bit of overt exposition.  Then in the next sequences we see how the survivors feel about his death, and we meet the man who will replace him; and see, immediately but through very subtle ways, how totally different this guy is to the man who died.   At no point does anyone say “You need to know that...” or “Let me tell you about...”  At no point is there any voiceover, and the very brief use of subtitles is relevant and adds pertinent information economically.  The whole thing is an absolute master class of “show, don’t tell”. 

The casting is another masterstroke.  Yes, I confess that this is why I ended up buying the dvd.  Yes, I-am-a-creature-of-crushes.  Etc, etc.  And, if you’re wondering, no, I’m not actually ashamed of it.  I’ve come to feel the only shameful crush is the one one is ashamed of.  I realise that, written down, that looks like a logical impossibility of some kind.  What I mean is that it’s the person saying “I don’t have a crush! How dare you – this is true love!” who is most likely to turn into a stalker.  Having the experience, a few years ago, of living just down the road from someone I admired hugely - seeing him in the greengrocer’s buying beans, or putting out his recycling bin on a Monday evening - cured me of any inclination ever to stalk anyone.  It was alternately boring and terribly embarrassing.

Anyway, to go back to my subject, this was the film that shot The Crush of the Moment from hard-working character actor into star-in-the-making.  It must have come as a shock; he was in his late thirties, after all, with at least fifteen years hard graft under his belt.  And he’s not remotely the regular identikit chiselled Hollywood Hero, gorgeous though he be.  He has a rough-edged, lived-in, everyman-ish gorgeousness; he’s none too tall and he’s got nice eyes, a round face and no cheekbones to speak of.   Not the usual movie star type at all, though to my mind far more interesting.  The possession of a truly lovely physique does wonders for the overall Hunk Score, but once again it’s an everyman’s great bod, not the gym-sculpted Artificial Perfection of a body builder.   He looks splendid, and very fit, with his shirt off, but like a fit human being, not something that was produced in a workshop using a hammer and chisel. 

Okay, I’ll stop drooling now, having bored anyone reading this rigid with that little side-disquisition on male beauty.  Ahem.   When he was offered this part, Mr R was not yet a star; he was a bloody good actor who got a lucky break in the form of a great (though clearly pretty stressful) role in which he could burn up the screen by just standing still, and finally get to show everybody just how much he could do with the most inward and minimal of means.   He is absolutely electrifying; it really restores one’s faith in the movie industry to see that a performance of this calibre can get someone noticed to this degree.  Quite what the assembled casting directors of Hollywood had been failing to notice up until then, I don’t know.  Maybe they’re all prejudiced against any chap who’s less than six foot in his socks. 

The other two leads are also excellent, and I’m very pleased to see that one of them, Anthony Mackie, has also begun to make a bit of a mark for himself now.  Talent and hard work can still be what it takes.  Hurrah for that.  But because all three of them look like everyman, and at the time of filming effectively were everyman,  one stops seeing them as anything but everyman, within minutes of the film starting.  So that it feels like a story about ordinary men, and not a fiction; and the visual style is messy enough to keep this documentary quality.  On the occasions when a known face appears he generally gets wiped out soon after.  It’s one of the best uses of a Brechtian distancing device I’ve seen for a while – the Movie Star appears, smiles, speaks a few lines and promptly gets killed, bang! One is thrown back each time to these three perfectly ordinary blokes who are brave and desperate and real, carrying on with their terrifying work, doing their human best, and coping with their frayed nerves, damaged souls, and breaking hearts. 

The end is utterly heartbreaking, too.  I actually sat and cried at the sight of someone shopping in a supermarket and clearing leaves out of a blocked drain.  It reminded me of one of the most potently subtle sad film endings I know, the closing scene of “Walkabout”.  I have no idea if the echoes I saw were intentional, mind you.  But I ended up glad for Sgt James; because he can go back, where the girl in “Walkabout” cannot.  And this brings me to the one place where I feel this otherwise superb film came crashing down.  It has a firmly stated message, which appears right at the beginning as an epigraph, in lieu of a title sequence.  But what follows is far deeper and more subtle than that epigraph can ever be.  So if one watches trying to relate everything to the epigraph, one ends up losing some of the laminations of meaning, of emotion, of human depth. 

If this had been a story about medics, then the thesis that war is a drug would have been demonstrated very clearly and without any contradictions.  A doctor can practice anywhere, after all.  Most of the places a doctor can practice are reasonably safe; certainly as safe as this office.  So a doctor who chooses voluntarily to keep returning to the battlefield can quite reasonably be suspected of an addiction to the danger and thrill of a war situation.  But really, what is a bomb-disposal expert supposed to do in civvy street?  It’s hardly a regular skill set to take to the local jobcentre.  The film makes it very clear that, troubled and difficult man though he is, Sgt James is also highly skilled and has a real aptitude for his job; he’s a natural.  Is there anywhere a really good, naturally gifted bomb-disposal man can do his right work, other than in the military, in a war zone?  I can’t think of any other option for him.  No-one likes to feel useless, after all.  One of the most touching elements of the “back home” sequences is the way James is always shown busy with something – something, anything - to be useful and keep himself occupied. 

The epigraph made me feel I was meant to have been thinking “Shitterbricks, how tragic, he’s going back, the poor addicted bastard” – but I didn’t.  I am pretty thoroughly anti-war; and I didn’t.  I just felt cross at having been told what to think.  Especially in the context of a film that was in every other way so very thought-provoking, so very moving, and so very unprescriptive.

Wednesday, 1 February 2012

A sad departure...


As a self-confessed balletomane, I suppose I have to say something about last week’s startling news,  Sergei Polunin’s exit from the Royal Ballet – and, judging by the latest story in the Daily Telegraph, even possibly from dancing altogether (the Telegraph isn’t my regular news source, incidentally! - far too centre-right for me, but their arts coverage is usually good). 

I have to admit I am not as overwhelmed by the loss of Mr Polunin as some.  Yes, he is a very showy technician.  Cor blimey, what a jump.  Cor BLIMEY, what entrechats...  And yes, he has a splendidly haughty, princely stage presence, and he is fantastically good-looking (provided you like cheekbones).  But I’m afraid I had rather got him labelled in my mind as not-fully-formed, because for my money he didn’t always seem terribly engaged dramatically.  There are some more disengaged chaps around, but there are also chaps at the RB I’d much rather see. 

When I saw a little while ago that it was going to be Mr Polunin dancing in “Marguerite and Armand” with Tamara Rojo I was a bit worried.  Ms Rojo is not only a phenomenal technician, she also acts with every breath in her body, and it is a real pain when one sees her paired with a bloke who looks blankly at her and doesn’t engage at all.  I can think of one young man, who shall remain nameless, going through the motions with perfect, bland accomplishment while at his side Ms Rojo emitted passion down to her fingernails.  

Luckily in “Marguerite and Armand” Mr Polunin came out of his shell and gave a tremendous performance, totally spot-on dramatically as well as technically.  For the first time I could really see why some of the papers had been acclaiming him as the next Really Huge Big Star.   He had a real chemistry with Ms Rojo and the performance was very, very good.  But Ms Rojo was the real star, even then. 

I know I’m not an expert and I’ve obviously been missing some extra fillip of terrificness in those jumps, entrechats etc.  But my main feeling is more one of sadness for Mr Polunin.  It’s such a waste, that a talented young man who could have been a Big Star (even if he wasn’t really one yet) has apparently flipped slightly and chucked in one of the very top jobs in his profession.  It seems a real shame, and no-one should have to be so stressed by their work that they reach that stage.  Who knows what went on behind the scenes? – certainly not me.  But I hope he gets his life sorted out.  If he truly doesn’t want to go on in the dance world, I hope he finds something else to do, something to which he is genuinely committed.  As it is, it just looks as though Mr Polunin was the “short-twitch muscle” equivalent of Ed no.1; not so much blessed as blessed-and-cursed by his enormous potential.

And in the meantime while we wait to see what the poor lad decides to do next, at least in the world of ballet everyone is used to sudden cast changes and to stepping in at short notice to fill a gap.  Anyone who had booked to see Mr Polunin as Oberon in Ashton’s “The Dream”, opening tonight, will get Steven McRae instead, and one can hardly feel short-changed by that (I had booked to see Mr McRae anyway, but then for my money he already is a Star – I’d pay good money to watch him stand at the side of the stage and look thoughtful).

Not much to report on my own account at the moment.  My head cold is coming out (cue loud sneeze) and my first day in the new job has gone quietly.  Now I’m off home to eat curry and try to finish Fairy Story number 2.  All the main characters are now under enchantments of one kind or another, and I have a big confrontation scene to write as they face off with the twin sorcerers who are responsible.  Eee, should be fun!

Thursday, 22 September 2011

Am I publishable?

Recently a friend suggested to me that instead of stressing myself with the long slog of trying to find an agent, I should self-publish online.  It was a useful suggestion, in so far as it helped me to clarify why I don't want to do that.  This may sound odd, because goodness knows I don't write with any expectation of making my fortune, and fame isn't much of a stimulus to me either.  I write for love; the love of writing, the love of story-telling, and the love of words, and so on the surface the suggestion I should self-publish electronically was not unreasonable. 

But it is the second of those three loves that gives me the clue to my answer.  I am a story-teller first and foremost (or at least, I think I am! - but that's another question...).  I don't mind if I have to have a "day job" for the rest of my life, I'm not in this for the money.  But if my writing is published, I want it to be read.  I want it to be available to anyone who might enjoy it - and I mean available in a genuine rather than a superficial sense; I want people who enjoy reading to be able to find it, obtain it and read it, through straightforward and familiar routes and normal outlets, and via channels where there is a certain guarantee of quality.  At the moment, that still means conventional publishing and conventional bookshops, and the online equivalents such as e-book sales as offered by conventional publishers.

In twenty years' time it may be different, but at the moment, as I see it, that's the state of affairs.  Indeed, I find it hard to imagine it changing significantly for a long time, if ever.  I don't mean that I think electronic publishing generally is going nowhere - that obviously isn't the case.  But online self-published material comes without the safety net (from the readers' PoV) of having received an objective assessment; anyone can stick their writing online, and if it's no good (or even absolutely NBG) that is no impediment to them.  At the moment, I can't see how a framework can ever develop, within the field of online self-publishing as a whole, for guaranteeing the quality of the writing.  Perhaps eventually there will come to be recognised "better" online self-publishing outlets, alongside places where anything at all can be issued.  Yet any system administered by the writers themselves has many possible problems and weaknesses.

In conventional publishing that framework for assessment already exists, and has done for years.  It may be flawed in places (is any system devised by and administered by people truly flawless?) but it's there and by and large it works. 

So if I want to be read, by more than a handful of people, I need to be published, and so I am left with the slog. 

Dear XXXX, I enclose the synopsis and sample chapters of my novel blah for your kind attention... Followed by a three month wait (or longer) to get another polite "No".   And this is when I find I am asking myself again if maybe I am unpublishable.  I simply don't know if what I write is sellable.  I think it's readable (I know I would, but still, trying hard to be unbiased, I think it is).  But is it commercially viable?  Because that remains the bottom line for the conventional publishing industy.  It was in the nineteen-fifties, when my mother worked at the Bodley Head, and it still is now.  Will I ever get anywhere, or am I wasting my (& everyone else's) time?  My lack of self-confidence drags me down into another patch of mild, insidious depression at the thought.  And I give another sigh and then I plug on, because in the end there is nothing else I can do.

Monday, 14 February 2011

A good weekend

On Friday we bade goodbye to my line manager Curlywoman; blast. I liked Curlywoman and she was a good boss, but she’s got a “dream job” selling hotel bookings - her idea of a dream job, not mine! – and in the end you can’t blame someone for pursuing their dream job. We all had a good evening at The Botanist, one of the local pubs, and I made the most of feeling okay again after my gyppy tum of earlier in the week. Many jokes were told, a fair number of glasses of wine were drunk, a lot of nachos and chips were eaten, poems were read, I bought a drink for someone I barely know because I thought she looked sad (only to find she looked sad because she was Very Very Drunk and feeling ill) and one of the Press Office suddenly cornered me with a barrage of questions about why-are-you-still-single-Imogen, to which I couldn’t give a satisfactory answer, largely because I don’t have one.

Got home at midnight, slightly tipsy despite having been sensible and had plenty of fruit juice as well as nice Aussie plonk. Dan v amused – “I’ve never seen you drunk before!” – I think he had a picture of me as a sober, wholefood-eating, sketchbook-wielding yoghurt-weaving type who never lets her hair down even a teensy bit...

Saturday – posted a birthday present, sent “Gabriel Yeats” off to the third agent on my list, fixed a problem with my rent payments, bought groceries, ran the washing machine, tidied and weeded in the garden, typed up some more of “Ramundi’s Sisters”, made cauliflower cheese, and watched a lovely sentimental movie.

Sunday – sorted out a lot of stuff, cleaned and tidied my bedside cabinet and my desk, typed up a lot more of “Ramundi’s Sisters” and dealt with a tricky revision, made braised quorn with lemon and herbs, and watched the last part of “Lark Rise to Candleford” (largely to report on it to my mum, who was out and whose video is out of action) and the latest episode of “Being Human”; then to wind down after that I finished another of the "back burner" project summaries, and started yet another. It took a while to wind down, truth to tell, as “Being Human” was a cracking good episode, funny and touching and thoroughly scary. When they get the balance right, they have a lovely little series there...

Typing and revising doesn’t leave anything concrete behind, the way working in the garden does, but it is very satisfying to see the pile of dog-eared manuscript getting smaller, and the size of the typed file getting bigger. I’ve got to the last section of “Ramundi’s Sisters”, I’ve reached 1927, and I’m just five scenes away from the end of the story.

Then I’ll need to re-read the whole thing, clean up typos I’ve missed, decide how much further revision it needs, and finally try sending it to the first agent I sent “Gabriel Yeats” to, since she did say that if I had anything more mainstream she’d like to see it. I’d be a fool if I passed up on an offer like that; as a tyro writer, I’m incredibly lucky to have that chance of further attention.

“Ramundi’s Sisters” is a different kettle of fish from “Gabriel Yeats” in many ways. I guess it is still magical realism, though; but it is at the end of the spectrum that has relatively little magic proportional to realism – “Gabriel Yeats” is right at the magic end, and possibly a little off it - the deep end, that is - as well. The other major thing they have in common is that they are both very romantic. It’s perhaps an embarrassing admission, but clearly I still Believe In Love.

Perhaps an even more embarrassing admission today. This Feb 14th I have had, for the twelfth year in a row, no Valentine cards. The frenzied month-long promotion of Valentine’s Day does get a little grating when one is long-term single; the only good thing about it was seeing the flower stalls I pass on my way into work, all packed with extra flowers today.

Finally, and I know this is a bit of an odd segue, but here’s Mr Orchid Nursery himself, telling you how to trim and repot your Phalaenopsis. A few nice shots of the interior of the Orchid Nursery (& a lot of footage of Mr O. Nursery’s hands – perfectly nice hands, I hasten to add, but the orchids are better).

Wednesday, 10 February 2010

Writing convoluted floriferous obfuscation...

...or boll*cks, as it should properly be called.

This is something of a speciality of mine, at least at work (I try to control it in my own personal writing). I'm not boasting, in fact I'm rather ashamed of it, but at times my job requires it. I tend to refer to it, with what is meant to be irony, as "blinding the public with waffle".

But I've just been reminded forcefully of George Orwell's famous rules on writing good English, in his essay "Politics and the English Language". This is a great piece of writing and I recommend it to anyone who hasn't come across it before. I don't agree with everything he says, but I agree with a heck of lot of it.

I admire the way Orwell manages to be perfectly even-handed, and even humourous, too, about a serious subject which clearly was hugely important to him. Re-reading the essay, I am reminded of how often I use what he calls "verbal false limbs", and I chide myself on my sloppy habits, and the sloppy thinking to which these habits are connected, as well as my tendency towards luxuriant verbiage.

It's a pity that the only place I've found the whole essay quoted online has the text in a form that is full of typos. That's ironic, too, and I can only hope Orwell would have found it funny...

I've just been reading a report from Defra, Kew's major government sponsor department. Draw whatever connections you like between that and the above...

Wednesday, 7 October 2009

Currently reading this...

I’m currently reading – to be precise, re-reading, having retrieved it and a few other things from a box at my mother’s – this:

The Birds Fall Down - Rebecca West.

I had forgotten what a masterly piece of writing it is. I have been completely gripped and cannot wait to get back to it tonight. I’m not sure I can collect my thoughts enough to explain why it is so superb.

It’s quite slow to get started, and quite a solid read; someone who disliked solid novels would find it hard going. But the steadiness of the beginning becomes meaningful as the story goes on. I won’t give away any details of the plot in case anyone reading this hasn’t read the novel and is intrigued, because it’s a mystery, and a thriller, in the truest sense of the words. It’s also one of the finest examples I’ve ever come across of a very tight third-person narrative; and in this case the narrator is both aware of some things that other characters are not, and helplessly unaware of other things which the reader can see – yet which we see through her eyes, aware ourselves that she is so uncomprehending as not even to see that she is missing something. In that respect it is a dazzling display of the technical craft of writing. But Rebecca West also pulls off my favourite trick of creating a balanced tension between technical genius and emotional sincerity; one suffers with Laura, with the Count, and one feels the dreadfulness of the betrayals that are exposed during the narrative, and the further layers of betrayal they provoke, and the further betrayals underlying these. And the quiet, steady build-up of tension is horrendous. Hence my desire to get to the end of the day, go home, and settle down to reading again.

Rebecca West once said something along the lines of that in her opinion Mozart was at the highest end of a scale of genius that also encompassed someone baking a good cake; in other words, talent is a continuum and is not the privilege of some tiny elite. In celebration of that honourable and democratic thought here’s the recipe for the bread-and-butter pudding I baked last night. It’s an easy recipe, great for using up slightly stale baked goods of almost any type, and far nicer than its simplicity would suggest.

Bread-and-butter pudding

A couple of slices of slightly stale bread per person. Or fruit bread, fruit cake, malt loaf, teacake. Probably good with most sorts of biscuits, too. You name it, really. Not sure it would work with shortbread, or with Mrs Crimble’s coconut cakes…
Dried fruit. I like to add chopped candied ginger or chocolate chips as well.
Butter
One egg per person
Milk
Sugar

Butter the bread/cake/whatever. Make dried fruit (& ginger/chocolate) sandwiches and cut up. Put in a greased oven proof dish. Sprinkle with a little sugar – less if the bread is rich fruit bread or cake, more if it is plain bread. Beat eggs and milk together – about ½ a pint of milk to every three eggs, although obviously also bear in mind the depth of the baking dish so you don’t end up with a huge amount of excess fluid. Pour the egg and milk mixture over the bread and fruit and leave to soak for 30-40 minutes. Bake in a medium oven for 30 minutes or so until the egg custard is set and the top is risen, golden and puffy. Good hot, warm or cold.